Analysis Paper

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The Commodores were an American funk and soul band during the 1970’s and 1980’s. They had a falling out when the lead singer, Lionel Richie, left the group to pursue a solo career in 1982, and for a few years after that, they could not make a hit song to save their lives until two sudden events happened in 1984. On January 21 and April 1, 1984, two great soul legends died. Their names were Jackie Wilson and Marvin Gaye. Both singers were loved by all, including The Commodores. The Commodores wanted to pay a tribute to Jackie Wilson and Marvin Gaye by using allusions to their own songs and telling of how the two great artists would bring their own style of singing into it: The Commodores song was called, “Night Shift.”